You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. • Describe your purchase order of this book • Explain the importance of the book • Say what you want the company to do for you

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Dear Sir or Madam, I have ordered an "IELTS-7+" book online

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Sunday and the order number is #3435642. I have opted for the normal delivery mode as the fastest delivery costs half of the book price. With that, it was expected to deliver by

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Sunday. I have already booked the exam date and laid a proper preparation schedule. And, I have very limited time to prepare and delay in receiving the material affecting my plan. Worth to mention is,

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test is very crucial for me to score A-grade, or else my citizenship status will be in trouble.

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, it is very critical for me to receive the shipment by Sunday,

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all my efforts will be futile. So, I request the team to work with the courier department and find the reason for the delay.

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, expedite the delivery of shipment in Fast-track mode. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Eric

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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