Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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people
tend to use alternative medicines and treatments rather than being examined by a physician. I strongly disagree with this
idea. In the following, some reasons are provided to support my notion.
Firstly
, the correct identification of the origin of a disease is the basic step in its cure, which is usually impossible to be done by unexpert people
. For example
, imagine a person with recurrent headaches who uses painkillers to alleviate the pain. Their pain might be controlled for a while but the main problem will remain unrecognized while the risk of illness deterioration would be on the rise. Therefore
, not all health conditions are easy to be recognized and treated without medical help.
Secondly
, following the wrong instructions when curing a disease will cause financial damage to a country. For instance
, spending money on inaccurate medications would waste an individual's budget as well as the capital that government furnish for the health care system. Thus
, the issue must be investigated with respect to monetary damages.
To summarize, deciding about
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. But there are copious aspects to this
topic that must be paid attention to. Considering the accuracy of diagnosis and financial matters, I truly encourage people
to visit their doctors and benefit from professional medical care.Submitted by k.shayestehfard on
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