Nowadays, in many countries women have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household chores equally between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
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also
working to support their families. Accordingly
, other family responsibilities should be distributed between husband and wife. I agree with the argument, considering that we are approaching a
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couples
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, the global village is approaching to
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the
egalitarian society, Correct article usage
an
also
intellectual powers of male and females are indifferent and has
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have
capabilities
of performing equally in Correct article usage
the capabilities
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, each family need to enjoy the Correct your spelling
comfort
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and facilities, but it is not feasible if only Correct your spelling
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single
person is working, Correct article usage
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ladies also
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to
fulfill
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requirements
requirments
of their family. Correct your spelling
requirements
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women
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responsibilities
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similarly
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need
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family
should aid her to avoid her overloading.
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the family
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absence
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of their wife. He can Correct your spelling
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cater to his children and take part finishing
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their
thier
homework, which will increase the bonding between father and children and Correct your spelling
their
chances
of sending the elderly to the old age home can be diminished. Correct article usage
the chances
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economic
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development
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