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• In our modern life, the reinstatement of older In our modern life, the reinstatement of older structures in the greatest towns all around the world costs a gigantic amount of

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would be superior spent on providing new apartments and street evolution.

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essay agrees that

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in the majority of countries the government spent the greatest amount of

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to develop roads or

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new housing

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of fixing ancient

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of all, the burning of ancient

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should not be allowed to spend public

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to develop, and ,

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it is better to build new

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than to repair old ones. • On the one hand, if the government do not allocate

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to fixing long ago construction, the

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is in an economic crisis. Because tourists contribute to the main wealth of the

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, many visitors like to see the ancient edifice. Because the

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are ancient monuments that reveal the history of that

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, all the main tourist places in our

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are places with ancient

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and monuments. Every

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is famous for

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buildings

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, if there are no

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, no one would be interested in

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, if the

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uses public

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only for new houses and road repairs, it will play a major role in the beautiful appearance of the

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, and through

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, the

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creates conditions for people and makes the appearance of the

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charming.

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, due to the lack of ancient

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in our

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, the state does not allocate a lot of

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for their repair, and

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money

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is mainly spent on building new

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. It creates new conditions for everyone. • In conclusion, having weighed everything mentioned and I can come to the conclusion that it is good that the

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spends a large amount of

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mainly on the renovation of ancient

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. Because these

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are a reminder to people since ancient times.