Tourists rather than local people mainly visit many museums and historical sites. Why is this? What can be done to encourage local people to visit museums and historical sites?

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popilace
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shows less inclination towards
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of historical backgrounds and
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than
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do. There are several
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reasons
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reasons
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trend and various measures can be taken by
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to improve
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situation. The driving force behind
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trend is
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different
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different
motivations of
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and local
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people
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people
. It is obvious that
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of curiosity about local history and culture strongly motivates
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to check out
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places
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like
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in a city or town during their stay.
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,
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are on holiday and have set aside time and money for these activities.
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,
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cost of entrance
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and
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the monotonous
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atmosphere discourage native people to go these
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. Since
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locals
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have basic knowledge about the history of their country, there is nothing interesting in persuading them to visit there.
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Therefore
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,these
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can be
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waste of money and time entirely. Despite
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,
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the attendance
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of local people could be encouraged in a variety of ways.
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,
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should be designed to be visually spectacular, and many have interactive activities or even games as a part of
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their
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exhibitions.
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, these
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could hold
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cultural
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cultural
festivals or glass for the community to celebrate a unique aspect of that particular place. Another possibility is to have special promotions,
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as a reduced price or free tickets provided in local newspapers and magazines. Related to
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, concession cards could
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also
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also
be provided to local people so they are encouraged to come more regularly. In conclusion,
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though
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though
different motivating factors lead the native residents to keep
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their distance
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from
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and historical sites, engaging
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in cultural
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events and promotions can make the
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difference
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difference
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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