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The tables show the average monthly income for a selection of

The tables show the average monthly income for a selection of
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The tables show the average monthly income for a selection of jobs in
Thailand
 and
Australia
 in 1997. They can be grouped into
graduate
 and non-
graduate
 occupations.
Overall
 it can be seen that almost all the
salaries
 are higher in
Australia
 than
Thailand
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in Thailand
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. The figures are given in Thai Baht. Both tables show that the
salaries
 were much higher in the
graduate
 group than
the
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in the
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non-
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non-graduate
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graduate
 group. In
Thailand
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,Thailand
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 they ranged from 85,000 for accountants to 242,000 for lawyers, and in
Australia
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,Australia
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 the range was from 125,500 for accountants up to 350,000 for surgeons.
On the other hand
, non-
graduate
 jobs had significantly lower incomes in both countries.
For instance
, in
Thailand
,
salaries
 started at 3,500 for labourers and went up to 7,000 for bus drivers.
Similarly
 in
Australia
, the range was from 50,000 for waiters to 75,000 for bus drivers.
Salaries
 were higher in nearly all the jobs in
Australia
 than in
Thailand
 in both
graduate
 and non-
graduate
 groups.
For example
, shop assistants and dentists earned 53,500 and 195,000 respectively in
Australia
,
while
, in
Thailand
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,Thailand
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 they were paid 5,500 and 187,000. The exception to
this
 was lawyers, who received 210,000 in
Australia
 and 242,000 in
Thailand
.
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