You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone whom you know personally but have not heard from in a long time. You found that some of the information published was incorrect. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. In your letter, ● state what the article is about ● mention the error(s) ● describe what you expect from the editor You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,.

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Dear sir, I am writing a letter to let you know that I have concerns with the agenda you wrote about
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week. Your article states that Mr Addison owns an agency that recruits young women to become prostitutes. The information written is vague, inaccurate and out of delicacy. I knew
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person and I believe that it is out of his character to do illegal activities because he is very professional and has respect for
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human beings. Apparently, It is true that he is running an employment process to send applicants to their dream jobs in other countries in which, he has all the certifications and accreditations to process those things. In relation to that, your article included illegal activities by the agency which is not true and does not have definite evidence. I advised you to make some clarifications on
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matter. Your newsfeed can affect the credibility of Mr Addison.
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, it may result in the closing of his property.
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his employees. If action is not taken soon, conflicts will arise. I am hoping for your feedback as soon as possible and write what is true. Yours Sincerely, Joanna
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inaccuracies
  • rectify
  • misinformation
  • reputation
  • verification
  • editorial integrity
  • correction notice
  • factual error
  • accountability
  • due diligence
  • retraction
  • implications
  • personal acquaintance
  • redress
  • journalistic standards
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