Some people today have argued that countries should interfere less in the affairs of other nations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every independent country

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their own foreign policy and internal procedures.

International

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relationship

is one of the major

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of the country`s development,

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support the opinion that foreign

countries

should not interfere in

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matters of

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independent country. I will enumerate my reasons below.

First

of all, communication is a key to every successful

relationship

,

therefore

without proper information nations should avoid

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in the way of

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of others. Often more developed

countries

try to control or suggest

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approach to some

problems

because they are more experienced, but

this

is exactly the same situation as adults

tries

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to control teenagers and often ends up with failure.

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, due to

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in Russia lot of Russians started to travel to Mongolia and

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government wants to stop that movement, some of our people now believe that they

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to manipulate our government and take all the natural resources, but

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propaganda which is not true.

This

kind of

relationship

often creates fear and misunderstanding among ordinary people,

hence

might affect

countries

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in a negative way.

Secondly

, independence means that country should be able to make

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mistakes and learn from

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as long as that problem is not affecting other

countries

. We should make clear boundaries of what

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of

problems

are internal and which

problems

will need

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support from others.

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, we don`t really care about what our neighbours eat at their homes, but if there is

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loud

noises

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or something that bothers us we would go there and ask. In my

opinion

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every mega

situations

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example, so we should respect

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privacy as well as

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internal

problems

. To conclude, I fully agree that

countries

should not interfere

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nation`s

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affairs without proper communication,

thus

it will affect

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the international

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relationship

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and positive cooperation.