Nowadays, distance-learning have gained in popularity, but some people argue that courses can never be as good as those taken by attending a college or university in person.To what extent do you agree or disagree

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is a must needed thing for human civilization. It does not matter of concern that in which way, a person

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knowledge

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, it might be online or offline. At present, many people claim that learning

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online is convenient for a

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some individuals believe that traditional

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is the best way to learn. I unwaveringly agree with the latter view. In

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disquisition, I will delineate how e-learning is interesting for the community, and why

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in a school or a university is essential. To commence with, distance

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is important for the population of

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globe to gain

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their convenient

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, and have

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to study in famous

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under well-known

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without going abroad. To elaborate,

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can maintain their work, and

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online because they have

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to select

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to learn.

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, one pupil can admit

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a foreign course to get an international certificate easily.

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a lots number of

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the University of the people, a distance-learning educational institute, in their suitable period, and

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an internationally recognized degree from their native country.

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community chose online as an educational platform

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a national and international degree using their comfortable

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,

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campus

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is more enjoyable and comfortable than online

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.

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system is essential for

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group. A

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not only

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achieve communication skills

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and social

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. To clarify,

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from lectures, and books can not make a

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to

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a social human being.

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, they have

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to get to gather with the different

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and can learn how they

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with

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others.

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is more social

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and creative than

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others

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, one can catch the

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quickly through face-to-face class and, they have enough chance to ask a question to their teacher

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if they have any

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regarding anything. To conclude, e-learning is vital to get a certificate in their comfortable

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, timetable totally depends on the

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, while offline

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in a school, college, and

university

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the university

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is pivotal to

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both

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, and

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with a team.