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A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: •What the presentation was about, •Why the presentation was important, •How did the book help you?

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Dear Mr. Smith I am writing to thank you for your kindness in letting me have your book for the
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 two weeks. The reason why using your book was so delightful for me, was I could handle my presentation professionally successfully. As you may have heard, my presentation was about Project Management Constraints and it was quite significant for my promotion in our department. It seems the impacts of the presentation were quite impressive because I was allocated by the headquarters office to manage our ongoing revamp project afterwards. The most useful parts of your handbook which undoubtedly helped me to prepare and guide my required data were three separate and detailed chapters about Time, Cost, and Risk Management. In fact, I was expected to find these subjects in your handbook because it is already the frequent standard, which is called PMBOK standing for Project Management Body of Knowledge. I thank you again and look forward to speaking about the point
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. Best regards Yours sincerely Abraham Streeter

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task achievement
Try to add more specific details about how the book specifically helped with the promotion or the recognition received.
coherence cohesion
Ensure the paragraphs connect more smoothly with transitional sentences.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and formal tone throughout, which is suitable for communication with a colleague.
coherence cohesion
Clear greeting and closing that enhances the overall structure and formality of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the gratitude being expressed, maintaining clarity.
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