Social media such as Facebook, Twitter and Instagram has replaced face-to-face communication in our everyday life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages.

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In recent years, there is a growing recognition of
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the popularity
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of social
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which is replacing face-to-face
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interaction
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interaction
among
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many
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societies.
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and disadvantages of
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issue. On the one hand, it is obvious that there are many significant benefits when social
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apps takes place of face-to-face
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communication
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. one of the major merits is that social
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allows
people
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to communicate any time,
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means that user can
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with everyone
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not need to be near them. Take Facebook as
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, user can use Facebook
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picture , call videos, chat voice or simple message
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depending
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depending
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lead to much more
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with friends and family. Another positive is need to mention is that the
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quality
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ability
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better,
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keep in touch with friends or family in covid-19.
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the geographical is narrowed because of social
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, there are some shortcomings when using social
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communication
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is omnipresence, the
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and obvious demerit is that using social
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apps
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lead
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to
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,
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have few outdoor activities which is decrease their health. The result of
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more and more
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do not like to hang out together. Another negative aspect is that the modern couple
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through Tinder,
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and Instagram
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and
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up
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Facebook messages. , they do not go outside their home to interact.
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the population is becoming isolated and lonely. In
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conclusion
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,
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speak face-to-face less than ever today, my opinion social
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advantages outweigh
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disadvantages
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the disadvatanges
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disadvatanges
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disadvantages
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People
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should try to balance the time between talking online and
communication
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face-to-face.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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