You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home it did not work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help. Write a letter to the company.

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Dear Madam, My name is Lyla Albertson, a faithful customer who has been shopping at your outlet for 6 years. I am writing

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letter to report the faulty television I bought from your shop two weeks ago. I got the 2024 Artel TV fully paid for on the 8th of November. I was assured

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was the latest brand with the best quality pictures.

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, when I arrived home I discovered that the images on the

sceen

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screen

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were blurry. I quickly called

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customer service to notify

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was put on

holdinstantly

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hold instantly

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, I visited the office and I was promised a technician who would come to check my television but I have still not been attended to. It has been 2 weeks now and

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action is totally unacceptable. I demand a quick refund or replacement of the TV by the company as soon as possible or I will take

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legal action. I look forward to hearing from you within a week Yours faithfully, Lyla Albertson

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Make sure to proofread for minor typographical errors, such as 'sceen' instead of 'screen' and 'put on holdinstantly' should be 'put on hold instantly.'

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Including specific details like a product reference number or customer service ticket number can strengthen your case.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a polite yet firm tone, suitable for a formal complaint.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making the letter easy to follow.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

169 words

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