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Is technology limiting creativity? Discuss your opinion

#technology #creativity
It is true that
technology
 is creating lots of boons which can make our life easy while some believe that
technology
 is limiting our
creativity
. In my opinion,
technology
 is way better to be a creative person. There are several reasons why
technology
 limits our
creativity
.
Firstly
, most people continue using lots of technological
devices
 like smartphones, computers, laptops and tablets and these kinds of
devices
 cause limitations in our creative ability.
Secondly
, we mankind rely on technological
devices
 in  every field range of calculation to think about something, and
as a result
 of
this
 kind of ,state
technology
 replaces our natural creative ability with artificial intelligence.  
However
, I believe that to increase our creative ability we need to be among the technological
devices
. , if we live among highly intelligent automation after we can learn some kind of useful things which can help to increase our creative thinking . A good example is that we always use the Internet and when we use it after we might watch lots of videos and information about different kinds of topics and
this
 way, can help to better
creativity
 and imagination as well.
Thus
, from my point of view, using technological
devices
 is a much better way to enhance our imagination.  To conclude,
although
 there are some negative sides of
technology
 that can prompt to limitation of peoples’
creativity
,
,
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 I feel that it is valuable for people to utilize technological
devices
 in order to develop
creativity
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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