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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be diverless.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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At the present time, with the advancement of technology, it is predictable to increase the amount of
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people
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a passenger. In my point of view, the advantages of
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 phenomenon, outweigh the disadvantages. I will discuss my reasons in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, there will be some negative points, for
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,
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drivers
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 situation. Due to the fact, with
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driverless
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 transportation, people would not need any
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 for their transport. So,
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 out
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, the system of the
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cars
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 may have some bugs.
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, passengers will be in danger
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car
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accident
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. A number of them cannot
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relinquish
 obstacles in their path. So, it causes some essential threats
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users
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 life.
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wrong
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 and clear
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 vital role of them in accidents. To clarify,
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 the biggest role in many
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car accidents in the whole
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. As result, with
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, without any doubt, in the near future,
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 would not use
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fuel or oil and they will be replaced by new energies
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solar, hydrogen and many other new methods.
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conclusion
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 my essay,
although
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driverless
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cars
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 will have a harmful impression on
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the economical
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 satisfaction of
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 can improve the safety of roads.
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, it will be practical for having a
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 environment and reducing the amount of
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pollution. I opine
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 the merits of
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 phenomenon will be more magnificent to compare with disadvantages.
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