In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be diverless.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
At the present time, with the advancement of technology, it is predictable to increase the amount of
the
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driverless
veacheles
in the new future. All Correct your spelling
beaches
of
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people
will Add an article
the people
considered
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be considered
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a passenger. In my point of view, the advantages of Change preposition
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this
phenomenon, outweigh the disadvantages. I will discuss my reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, there will be some negative points, for this
phenomenon in the next
decades. Firstly
, this
will be harmful for
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drivers
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drivers'
driver's
economy
situation. Due to the fact, with Replace the word
economic
the
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driverless
transportation, people would not need any drivers
for their transport. So, drivers
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Secondly
, the system of the advancement
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cars
may have some bugs. Consequently
, passengers will be in danger for
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car
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a car
the car
accident
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accidents
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. A number of them cannot relingouish
obstacles in their path. So, it causes some essential threats Correct your spelling
relinquish
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users
life.
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users'
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On the other hand
, there are some benefits of using this
new method of driving in the near future. The prominent reason is about reducing humans
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human's
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the
vital role of them in accidents. To clarify, Change the word
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have
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the
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word
. As result, with Correct your spelling
world
driverless
cars
we will Add a comma
,cars
diminished
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diminish
this
issue with the improvement of cars
industry. Correct article usage
the cars
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second
, without any doubt, in the near future, driverless
cars
would not use the
fuel or oil and they will be replaced by new energies Correct article usage
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such
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solar, hydrogen and many other new methods.
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conclusion
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although
driverless
cars
will have a harmful impression on economical
satisfaction of Correct article usage
the economical
drivers
, this
can improve the safety of roads. Correct pronoun usage
they
Additionally
, it will be practical for having a clear
environment and reducing the amount of Correct your spelling
clean
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pollution. I opineCorrect article usage
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,
the merits of Remove the comma
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this
phenomenon will be more magnificent to compare with disadvantages.Submitted by parsafatahi1998 on
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