In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Reading is considered

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one of the multiple ways through which anyone can learn new words and complex sentence formation. Reading helps to visualise the incident and helps to remember it quickly. Some

people

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believe that

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articles and online media

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improved exponentially recently and feel that

people

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will stop buying and reading printed articles in the near future and I disagree with

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hand held

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devices and

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access to the internet. Due to

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they have constant access to recent

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and prefer reading articles online

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because

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, there are

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of websites which offer

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updates and have

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writers and they use catchy

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to attract new readers

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, netizens prefer using Kindle a reading device which has all the new books based on the subscription and they love using it as it is

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and easy to carry.

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, they are now slowly getting away from the reading habit as they listen to their books in the form of

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will not only impact their way of acquiring knowledge but

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from the roots of any language. To continue

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people

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who like to read or are reading for

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many years will still prefer to buy printed novels and newspapers.

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the

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or story but

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the texture of a paper.

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, it improves the depth of the story and helps a reader

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attain mental peace. To exemplify, old

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prefer to read

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newspaper every morning and

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only believes the

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printed.

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hard to trust the

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over the internet as no one takes the authority of that being true and or documented through valid resources.

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, in my opinion, it would be wise to say that due to

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diversity and choices, there will be an uneven balance between readers but printed media will be used and trusted more than any other source.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

371 words

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