In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Reading is considered

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one of the multiple ways through which anyone can learn new words and complex sentence formation. Reading helps to visualise the incident and helps to remember it quickly. Some

people

believe that

news

articles and online media

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improved exponentially recently and feel that

people

will stop buying and reading printed articles in the near future and I disagree with

this

notion. In

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essay, I will explain my opinion with relevant examples.

To begin

with, nowadays everyone uses

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hand held

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devices and

have

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access to the internet. Due to

which

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they have constant access to recent

news

and prefer reading articles online

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because

becuase

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because

it is free.

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, there are

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of websites which offer

every minute

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updates and have

well educated

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writers and they use catchy

slangs

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to attract new readers

everyday

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For example

, netizens prefer using Kindle a reading device which has all the new books based on the subscription and they love using it as it is

light-weight

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and easy to carry.

Moreover

, they are now slowly getting away from the reading habit as they listen to their books in the form of

audios

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This

will not only impact their way of acquiring knowledge but

also

distance

themselves

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from the roots of any language. To continue

further

people

who like to read or are reading for

past

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many years will still prefer to buy printed novels and newspapers.

This

is because, when an avid reader reads something which is printed, he

just

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not only

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the

news

or story but

also

feel

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the texture of a paper.

Therefore

, it improves the depth of the story and helps a reader

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attain mental peace. To exemplify, old

people

prefer to read

fresh

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newspaper every morning and

also

only believes the

news

which

are

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printed.

In addition

this

, it is

also

hard to trust the

news

which

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surface

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over the internet as no one takes the authority of that being true and or documented through valid resources.

Lastly

, in my opinion, it would be wise to say that due to

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diversity and choices, there will be an uneven balance between readers but printed media will be used and trusted more than any other source.

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