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In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

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In
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outfits
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 of the fashion style of the west.
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 are multiple reasons behind
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, and it has both merits and demerits.
One
 of the leading reasons that
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 considering is how advanced information technology
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 been in recent years. Many social
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 have been advertising the charming and glamorous aspects of
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western
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 clothing and with the connection to the internet,
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 are capable of obtaining these products more than ever.
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Furthermore
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, another cause can be some people believing these
outfits
 bring them a sense of social confidence. On the
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 to the positive sides of
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 a vibe of simplicity and
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freedom
 that some traditional
outfits
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This
 is because many clothing styles in different nations are designed and worn in a complicated way that limit
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 movements. Another advantage can be the unification it brings to a community as
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uniforms can bring people a feeling of equality.
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 the other hand,
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 disadvantages of
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 it can lead to cultural dilution. To be clearer, every culture of its own personality and
this
 personality can be observed by its customs and clothing style.
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western
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western
outfits
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characteristics
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characteristics
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Additionally
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, the climate and weather conditions in many countries may make it not suitable to wear
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, it is clear that technology and personal preferences are the two main reasons why a large number of people choose suits and jeans over traditional clothes, and
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 different angles.
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