Some people think that technology makes life complex, so we should make our life simpler without using technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

These days,

technology

has developed significantly.

However

, it is said that we should stop using it since it complicates our

lives

more.

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opinion, despite the complexity that

technology

may bring, I completely disagree with

this

statement for a number of reasons which will be outlined below On the one hand, it is undeniable that technological advances can make life complex. Many people are addicted to their phones or social media which results in them isolating themselves from the real world.

As a result

, they slowly fail to recognize the meaningful aspects of life which leads them to suffer from mental disorders

such

as depression or anxiety.

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recent research published by Harvard University suggested that people who are addicted to

technology

have a higher chance of committing suicide

On the other hand

,

technology

has made our

lives

simpler in numerous ways.

Firstly

, there have been many useful inventions for mankind,

such

as

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kitchen gadgets or electronic devices. These have undoubtedly simplified our daily

lives

tremendously.

Secondly

, robots have been invented to be in charge of dangerous tasks in factories.

Therefore

, humans do not need to engage in life-threatening activities to make a living anymore .

Last

year's report showed that there was a 90% drop in the number of deaths which came from the incidents in manufacturing areas.

This

statistic indicates that workers can work more safely with the aid of robots In conclusion,

although

technology

has drifted some people away from reality, I believe that it has changed our

lives

completely and made them more convenient and less traumatic.

Technology

breakthroughs have transformed society successfully