In some counties an increasing number of people are suffering from health promblems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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percentage of people are troubled by

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hazards, and it has become a heated debate whether governments should impose a higher tax on fast

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. In my personal opinion, I disagree with the opinion provided, the possible reasons and better solutions for

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issue are obvious, which are going to be discussed in the following essay. Personally, I believe there are three primary causes of the

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hazards we encounter nowadays.

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, the westernization of diets has taken a huge role in our daily life

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as fast

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, processed

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and sugary products, which significantly contribute to the trend of overweighting.

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, it is proven that being overweight is highly related to the possibility of having respiratory diseases. Speaking of respiratory diseases, another contributing factor

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issue is air pollution. It is clear that the increasing number of CO2 emissions produced by the development of industries

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led to not only global warming and climate change but

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air pollution.

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but not least, the sedentary lifestyle in the modern world

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makes a negative impact on our

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lifestyle, lacking physical activities in

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, has resulted in metabolic syndrome and obesity for our generation.

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of doing exercise and going outside, many children and adults would like to just stay at home and watch TV, which is clearly not enough for the minimum requirement of exercise.

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, it is unnecessary to be overly worried about those problems. There are three actions that I think the

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should take to address those issues. For one thing, the

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should introduce new legislation to promote balanced diets.

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, the law dictates that all information regarding ingredients and

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processes of

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products should be listed to help customers understand what they actually eat.

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, developing the habit of regular exercise can provide huge benefits for solving

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issues. If the

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can subsidize

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and regular

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check-ups, citizens will have more motivation to get into these healthy habits.

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, taking action for reducing CO2 emissions has a positive influence

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the problem we face. The higher

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quality we make, the better life we have. In conclusion, the reasons and solutions for the

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hazards that we have to deal with are apparent. All the

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has to do is take action for our

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