Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

The variety of
food
present in the
country
is available from the mixture
country
's growth and import from worldwide. It is argued that edible
items
which are manufactured in the
country
, should be the only source of
food
for the population and the number of imported
food
items
should be minimized.
This
essay totally disagrees that imports should be decreased as manufactured
food
should be the only
items
available because like
this
nutrient requirements will suffer and the
country
will lose its foreign relationships. The limited supply of imported
food
products will affect the essential nutrient intake required by the body to strengthen human beings. To be more clear, even though
countries
produce different
food
items
, they can not produce a variety of nutrients containing foods required by our bodies.
This
is why foods are being imported to fulfil the gap
of
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in
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the missing
food
industry, as a ,result healthy calories and supplies
are
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is
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achieved by the human body.
For example
,
although
avocadoes are not produced in Pakistan they are outsourced internationally, which helps in a weight reduction of the population, possibly leading to a healthy lifestyle.
This
shows that the more variation in
food
, the healthier the society. Another reason why
food
import should not be decreased is the fact that it will influence the relationship of different
countries
with each other.
That is
to say that, while the
country
will only be focused on their supplies, there are other
countries
who would want to grow economically by exporting their
food
products which will affect foreign relationships.
For instance
, Iran has been always 70% dependent on its own supply with minimal imports leading to suffering their citizen achieving international visit visas due to poor relationships. It is evident that economic growth comes with imports and exports of the
country
leading to the development of citizens' living. In conclusion,
although
a
country
can be dependent on its own manufacturers it is important to have variations of
food
in the
country
as it helps to provide nutrients as well as beneficial for the growth of
countries
leaders as well.
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