Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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The variety of
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present in the
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is available from the mixture
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's growth and import from worldwide. It is argued that edible
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which are manufactured in the
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, should be the only source of
food
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for the population and the number of imported
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items
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should be minimized.
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essay totally disagrees that imports should be decreased as manufactured
food
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should be the only
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available because like
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nutrient requirements will suffer and the
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will lose its foreign relationships. The limited supply of imported
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products will affect the essential nutrient intake required by the body to strengthen human beings. To be more clear, even though
countries
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produce different
food
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items
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, they can not produce a variety of nutrients containing foods required by our bodies.
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is why foods are being imported to fulfil the gap
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the missing
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industry, as a ,result healthy calories and supplies
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achieved by the human body.
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avocadoes are not produced in Pakistan they are outsourced internationally, which helps in a weight reduction of the population, possibly leading to a healthy lifestyle.
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shows that the more variation in
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, the healthier the society. Another reason why
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import should not be decreased is the fact that it will influence the relationship of different
countries
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with each other.
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to say that, while the
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will only be focused on their supplies, there are other
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who would want to grow economically by exporting their
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products which will affect foreign relationships.
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, Iran has been always 70% dependent on its own supply with minimal imports leading to suffering their citizen achieving international visit visas due to poor relationships. It is evident that economic growth comes with imports and exports of the
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leading to the development of citizens' living. In conclusion,
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a
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can be dependent on its own manufacturers it is important to have variations of
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in the
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as it helps to provide nutrients as well as beneficial for the growth of
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leaders as well.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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