Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether

students

should focus on

further

education

in universities and colleges or

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is better to let them apply for a

job

straight after school. In

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I am going to present both views and give my opinion. Some people tend to think that it is better to continue your

education

in higher institutions, because of the higher employment opportunities. One of the

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things we need to take into consideration is that universities and colleges give you more understanding and knowledge in the sphere you are studying in,

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helps you become a better specialist and most

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the

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employers search for

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workers.

For example

, nurses and dentists are required to have special training, which can take

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about ten years, without it they won’t even be able to become a simple

doctor

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. But not only

students

of medical specialisations take

further

education

, designers, managers, writers and others do it too, that’s because often

students

don’t have enough knowledge to start their career, but with the help of professors, they have a lot more chances to become professionals and it will be easier for them to get a

job

.

However

, others insist that it’s better to get a

job

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because you can earn money and not spend it on expensive learning.

For instance

, university prices go higher every year

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is not affordable for every family to let their children apply for one, so as we can see from the

last

trends, it becomes more common for

students

to start their own

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businesses

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, build

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a career

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career

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as a photographer, freelancer or etc. and make good money out of it. To conclude, I consider learning at high

education

institutions is a good base for future

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and

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students

will get is indispensable, but in my

opinion

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it is not a necessity and it would be nicer to put less pressure on those, who have chosen not to take

this

path and got a

job

straight after school.