The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous government’s expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that governments should pay a

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amount of

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to maintain old

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in major cities across the world, while others think

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money should be spent building new houses and developing roads. Personally, I agree with

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. Granted, it is partly reasonable to spend

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government budget to restore old

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since some of them have historical value. Several ancient

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are the crystallization of generations’ wisdom and

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represent those regions’ cultural characters. Those,

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in Beijing and ancient castles in some European countries, always bring a feeling of national identity and pride to their residents.

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new housing and road development, it will have more advantages.

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, constructing more houses can effectively relieve the issue of

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shortage as modern apartment blocks have the ability to hold thousands of families.

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, it can increase people’s quality of life because new ones always equip advanced facilities

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as elevators, gyms and community clinics.

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means residents can easily access

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professional guides in terms of physical and mental health. When it comes to developed road systems, there are at least two advantages. One is that flexible movements of products will significantly improve, which means more items can enter the market and the economy will definitely be

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in a long run. Another is that the problem of traffic

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can be tackled to large extent. In

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situation, commuters can save their time on the road and they can spend

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time in other fields that they suppose

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interesting and worthy,

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as taking care of their children or parents, learning more knowledge or just relaxing. In conclusion,

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to preserve some historical

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is necessary, I think more money should be spent to build more houses and roads to meet people’s needs and bring essential convenience to our life.