Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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is considered a beautiful
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of art,
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argued by some that
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can be a great
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of getting
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from different backgrounds together .
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of art can be an extremely helpful tool to bring
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of
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why each
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has its own taste in
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. On the
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hand ,
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can be considered a universal language.and
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that can bring all kinds of
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from all nationalities under
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probably because
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is easily understood ,we do not need an interpretation to make us analyze what we hear .
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, we find
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immediately start dancing once the
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regarding whether they understood the context or not. Indeed
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unites
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irrespective of their cultural background.
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, special
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related to each
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can reflect their own taste in
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might not find wide acceptance on a global level.
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major reason for
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the language used in
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music
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can be unacceptable in other areas of the world.
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, what is accepted in
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country, can be perceived as taboo in another .
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,some rap
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contains offensive language that can be totally unaccepted
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in some cultures regarding
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the age of the listener .At the end of the
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each
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has its own special
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of
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. In conclusion,
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is a nice way of uniting nations . In my opinion ,while different populations can agree on some
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special
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special for each
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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