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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private company. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In Recent Times, I totally disagree that government
research
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 is only carried out and controlled rather than
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private companies
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companies
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 with, In recent times private
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 playing a prominent role in Scientific
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 which is leading to successful inventions in all areas throughout the world. In modern technology, Private
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 are conducting numerous trials in all the sectors like Medical, Software and Space stations to discover ideas. Most of the latest technology is being implemented by private
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 like Robotics , Electronic Vehicle Cars, and Discovering new medicines throughout the world which is helping human beings for living a better life.
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, All modern inventions are really helpful to the government in raising the economy. In the coming ,days we may face a lot of petrol crises. To overcome
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 Petrol crisis, private
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 introduced Electron Vehicles which run on a battery charger. Nowadays humans are keenly interested and coming forward to opt for Electron vehicles due to the rise in Petrol prices. There are various discoveries made by private
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 in all sectors.
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 , Private
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 played a crucial role in scientific
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 for discovering medicine to eradicate dreadful Covid diseases which saved a lot of human lives. In conclusion, I totally agree that government has to give a prominent place to private
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 in scientific
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 and support in all situations which results to discover new ideas. Administration and private
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 both have to work together in scientific
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 to achieve and invent great ideas which help the world to run in Modern Technology
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