You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed at their house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for staying with them Tell them what you enjoyed the most about the holiday Explain you are sending photos of the holiday with the letter

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Dear Alex, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health and spirits. I had a great experience with you during our holidays at your home. I am extremely delighted and thank you for

such

overwhelming care at your house. I could not realize how the time flew and our holidays ended up. I am really missing that moment. We will plan

such

a reunion again in future at my place. I definitely enjoyed the delicious food prepared by your mother every day.

In addition

, I had great company with your cousin during our cycling tour. I liked the most our Taj-Mahal full-day tour which had marvellous feelings. I would never forget

such

a wonderful time.

Last

night of our stay, we went for a gala dinner at

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hotel, It was a totally awesome plan. I am sending you hard copies of photos which we captured during our stay to gather. We clicked some of the best photos and these will be lifetime memorable events. Stay Safe, Lots of Love, Regards, ANAND

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9 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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