Developing countries require international organization’s help. Some people prefer financial aid while others think practical aid and advice are better. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

It is generally acknowledged that underdeveloped countries are dependent on international organizations'

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. People are in the argument whether financial

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will be more beneficial than that other practical help or advice. In

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essay, we will discuss both sides of the coin and will give a logical opinion after carefully weighing both arguments. On the

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side of the argument, it is true that developing

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require monetary assistance from other

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in order for them to improve their country's urgent needs. Most developmental project plans cannot materialize unless

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sufficient fund is available. For

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reason, poorer

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will have to ask for financial

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from richer

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for them to progress and improve their current situation. It is undoubtedly beneficial for

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situation.

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, in some instances, other developed

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take advantage of

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, they will put more interest rates on the money lent and in the long

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it will be disadvantageous to the poorer

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and add economic burden on them.

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, it is undeniable that giving practical help and or advice to

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will help them grow in some ways.

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, providing them with some supplies or enhancing and making use of the resources they have. Doing

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will reduce their international credit and

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ease their financial strain.

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, it will not give them the immediate desired outcome. In conclusion, I would say that both financial and practical help have their advantages and disadvantages.

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, it is hard to nail down whether one is better than the other. It is important to note that it is undoubtedly true that financial

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is helpful for the immediate reconstruction of one's country while it is

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true that if it is overly done , it could hurt the country's economy even more in the future.

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, practical ways like enhancing the resources will be beneficial but will not provide

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