You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: • where you went • what you saw there • how you felt about it You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Rutuja, Hope you're, well. It's been a while since I
last
heard from you. Hope everything is good with you. I am writing
this
letter to let you know that after months of planning we took holiday and went to Paris
last
month. I am glad to say that it was one of the best vacations we had
this
year. On the
first
day ,we visited "La Louvre" which is the best museum in the world and every artist dreams to visit it at least once in a lifetime.We got completely mesmerized by looking at its glass pyramid structure and clicked more than fifty pictures there. It took us a half day to complete a tour of the museum, we started at the Sculpture hall and ended with famous European artists' paintings which are depicting the French Revolution. When we reached the end of one auditorium corner and found all the people's cameras in one direction. We understood that there is a world-class famous painting of "Mona Lisa". I can't be more amazed after my visit. We were astonished because we actually experienced everything we had heard about it. I am sending you guys a souvenir and attaching some pictures. I wish we take our
next
trip together to Paris and will plan to visit Disney Land as well. Let's catch up on your birthday. See you soon! Yours lovingly, Prajakta
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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