You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: • where you went • what you saw there • how you felt about it You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Rutuja, Hope you're, well. It's been a while since I

last

heard from you. Hope everything is good with you. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that after months of planning we took holiday and went to Paris

last

month. I am glad to say that it was one of the best vacations we had

this

year. On the

first

day ,we visited "La Louvre" which is the best museum in the world and every artist dreams to visit it at least once in a lifetime.We got completely mesmerized by looking at its glass pyramid structure and clicked more than fifty pictures there. It took us a half day to complete a tour of the museum, we started at the Sculpture hall and ended with famous European artists' paintings which are depicting the French Revolution. When we reached the end of one auditorium corner and found all the people's cameras in one direction. We understood that there is a world-class famous painting of "Mona Lisa". I can't be more amazed after my visit. We were astonished because we actually experienced everything we had heard about it. I am sending you guys a souvenir and attaching some pictures. I wish we take our

trip together to Paris and will plan to visit Disney Land as well. Let's catch up on your birthday. See you soon! Yours lovingly, Prajakta

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

232 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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