Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been argued that excessive population is the most outstanding threat to the

environment

of the globe. I totally agree with

this

idea. One of the main

environment

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effect

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that is

attributed to overpopulation is the

growing

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of

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air pollution due to the overuse of transportation means. We are now living in

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world with advanced technologies in transportation, which means modern

people

nowadays cannot live without

traveling

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travelling

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by taking

airplane

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airplanes

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, vehicles or ships.

Such

transport tools generate a staggering volume of exhausted fumes on a daily basis and in turn have

negative

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impact on air quality.

Therefore

, if there are too many

people

in

this

world, the increasing demand for transportation will exacerbate

this

problem considerably. Another notable environmental issue that overpopulation will cause is the climbing accumulation of

rubbish

, which causes

damages

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to both soil and ocean.

Although

not all the products produced by

human

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humans

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are detrimental to the

environment

, undoubtedly,

people

nowadays still rely on chemical products like

disinfectant

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and materials which are non-biodegradable,

such

as some plastics bottle and bags. When

such

chemical

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chemicals

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and materials become

rubbish

while

people

are fail

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to dispose of them appropriately, the soil would be eroded and the ocean would be severely polluted. Not to mention that many creatures living in oceans are dead because

them

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ate the plastic products

by

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incidentally. Unfortunately, with the increase in population, the amount of

such

rubbish

would be increasingly produced and the

environment

would be put at stake as

the

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result of

this

trend. In conclusion, due to the impact of increasing exhausted fume and non-

environment

-friendly

rubbish

, it is totally reasonable to believe that overpopulation will become the top concern to the

environment

. The

governmental

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should

make

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take

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actions

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to curb the adverse impacts of

climbing

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population

to

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the

environment

of our world.