You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Hi, Dear joun, I am writing to express to you my condition, I m working in an office and I should know about word
software
but there is a problem. your department said me I should pass learning
of
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windows in advance. I have learned
this
software
almost 10 years ago.
also
, I used to run many applications through
this
software
in my work.
furthermore
, I need to register for the word
course
because
this
will lead to I can have big progress in my work. Please if possible for you, check my ability in windows
software
and
also
let me enrol in word
software
. I am sure that I can gain a good score in
this
course
,
in addition
, I do not want to regret you and after
this
course
,definitely I am going to pass the
course
of the window. I am looking forward to seeing your answer. yours sincerely, sad.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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