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Technolgy today such as mobile phones are destroying social interactions. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that public relationships are becoming very weak because of the advance in technology in modern
devices
 like smartphones. I totally agree with
this
 opinion and think that interaction between
people
 must be face-to-face.
First
 of all, I believe that
people
 spend a great amount of
time
 on their phones and they do not spend enough
time
 with each other. Because there is an endless list of things
people
 can do on them, some
people
 prefer to explore social media websites and share their live events on them.
However
, others just want to surf the internet.
For example
, France, which has the highest rate of portable phone usage, they have the highest divorce rates because they can not interact and communicate effectively with each other.
That is
 why it is more important to limit the
time
 that
people
 used to spend with their electronic
devices
.
Secondly
, being alone with
devices
 can lead humans to lose connection with the real world and only live in a virtual place.
In other words
, there is a strong relationship between usage
time
 and intellectual health. children that have easy access to modern technology phones have decreased their cognitive skills.
For instance
, scientists consider that the more
time
 you spend with your mobile, the more you do not want to participate in real-life activities,
also
 nineteen per cent of introverts were a result of long-term usage of mobiles.
thus
, social life without smart
devices
 is advantageous, for it keeps us safe from mental illness. To conclude, I strongly see that modern technology can put an end to our social relations and disconnect humans from each other. Because they will waste their valuable
time
 on it and it isolates them from the real world.
Submitted by Psychobreak97 on

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