In many countries, the amount o f crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes o f crime? How can we deal with those causes?

Nowadays, the amount of
crime
is increasing in many countries.
This
is one important problem many nations must face and resolve. In my opinion, the
first
reason is the economical situation, the
second
reason is technology developing. With technology developing, more and more
games
and
movies
are increased including
crime
games
. The
games
are made clearly and truthfully. So
people
often confuse that it is real or not.
For example
, SONY company created the game box PS5 which is famous and popular around the
world
. There are lots of
crime
and action
games
inside it. At the same time,
crime
movies
are
also
raising all over the
world
. Plenty of young
people
like to imitate the role of those living in the
games
or
movies
. They don’t know right from wrong.
Therefore
, they often make crimes.
Secondly
,
people
who are living in
this
world
has full of competition and pressure. Some
people
just want to get money by treating other
people
instead
of working hard.
Such
as lots of elders lost their money due to financial
crime
. To resolve these problems, governments should limit youth
people
's use of some websites or Apps, especially some
movies
and
games
.
For example
, some western countries have already made different grades for films so that some
movies
that young
people
cannot watch. At the same time, governments, schools, and parents should educate the youth
people
together. Young
people
need to know what they can do and what is limited.
In addition
, the government needs to create fair economical competition for all the
people
to avoid financial crimes. In conclusion,
although
avoiding and solving
crime
is a difficult job, we should try our best to do it, not only for ourselves but
also
for the
world
in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • socioeconomic factors
  • poverty
  • unemployment
  • dysfunctional families
  • parental guidance
  • peer pressure
  • substance abuse
  • lenient laws
  • weak enforcement
  • legal system
  • law enforcement
  • media influence
  • desensitize
  • glorification of crime
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