Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is considered that childhood is very fertile for learning.
Language
specialists’ conviction is better to start educating
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second
language
to a pupil while in primary
school
.
Such
policies lead to
better
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understanding of
language
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to
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the
children
.
However
, some other specialists claim that
school
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should not give the burden of
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to the
children
. In
this
essay, I will analyse the merits and demerits of embarking overseas
language
in primary
school
. Many scholars assume that a child's mind is considered
as
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tabularasha (blank sheet) where anything can be printed so quickly.
Likewise
, internalising
language
during the early age of human beings is
also
quite effective and quick.
For example
, I learned Magar
Language
with my friend when I was in primary
school
, which I haven’t forgotten yet. I learned many words and became able to communicate fast.
Therefore
, I personally recommend to the
policy makers
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to introduce a course
of
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second
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language
in primary
school
.
On the other hand
, some other scholars of
language
opined against the policy
introducing
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overseas
language
in
the
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primary schools. They claim
children
should be left free in the learning process during their initial
school
days. Giving
over burden
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to the primary
school
children
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so many materials may have detrimental impacts
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their
mind
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minds
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since foreign
language
is not compulsory rather it is optional, they can make a choice when they are grown up.
Furthermore
, overburdening may kill a pupil’s creativity.
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,
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policy makers
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policymakers
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should be mindful while introducing curriculum. As their claim looks serious, it would be good to conduct more research in regard to the issue.
Finally
, I recognize the opposite view of some scholars not to give more burden of teaching abroad
language
in primary
school
. I firmly believe that we should tap the potential of
learning
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capacity of
children
during their early age so that learning would be very impactful throughout their life.
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  • Cognitive development
  • Brain plasticity
  • Multicultural awareness
  • Curriculum
  • Globalization
  • Proficiency
  • Linguistic skills
  • Academic performance
  • Mother tongue
  • Bilingualism
  • Foreign language acquisition
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