Today, some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of female and male in every subject. Others believe that this is an unacceptable policy. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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people

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argue about one of the most controversial issues that the numbers of male and female students should be equalized in every subject in university.

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, the majority of others completely unaccept

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is not really suitable for reality and justice, and I do not recommend all

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universities

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do that.

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of all, if universities execute publicly the

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of equaling numbers of two genders, absolutely in theory it will

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some advantages. In

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course will quickly motivate

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gender parity, and the result is both boys and girls have the same opportunities in getting

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after graduating.

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minority of females

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fond of choosing transportation, so if the input criteria

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increased, the rate of females getting

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inclines too.

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, the

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will break social taboos. Because people normally believe that

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are not

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a specific job

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as accountant, the proportion of male accountants will limit these taboos.

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, people believe that

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because of the

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of

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want to become policemen, if the total target of

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university is 1000 students, resembling

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only 500

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accepted, soo lots of these

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will be unemployed.

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, they have to choose another major they are not interested in. Obviously

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reality,

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significantly

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those in theory. I

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strongly disagree with that. In conclusion,

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number of boys and girls in every subject, because it is not helpful to all

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students

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in the future.