Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What are the major causes of environmental damage? Who are responsible for preventing environmental damage?

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There is no argument that the climate is one of the factors that every country should include in its priorities. Many countries face a huge problem with the climate. In the following paragraphs, the cause and solution for

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problem will be outlined in detail. One of the major causes of environmental damage is unawareness of the habitat. Nowadays, people become careless about the climate. They use plastic more than 10 pieces a day and do not separate types of trash. These behaviours of human beings are dramatically increasing pollution on our earth.

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, overpopulation is

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the cause of it because the resources which are served everyone are not enough.

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, it leads to using too many resources and it affects global warming because the resources have to take time to reuse.

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, environmental damage is always placed on the shoulders of the government when in fact it should be everybody's to respond to it. Starting from an individual is better to

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the government to do it.

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, separating trash is one of the factors in decreasing pollution because the trash will be recycled and returned to kinds of stuff

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as bottles or clothes efficiently. Actually, it would be easier if the government and its citizens responded to the issues together

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as by creating environmental projects. In conclusion, the cause of environmental damage is started ourselves and it should be fixed by ourselves

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

240 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrialization
habitat destruction
urbanization
overpopulation
overexploitation
deforestation
biodiversity
waste management
fossil fuels
air pollution
climate change
renewable energy
sustainable agriculture
recycling systems
international cooperation
conservation

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