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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

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Learning to speak a new
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 is a skill that everyone should acquire. Some believe that
people
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 should learn a new
language
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 only in case they travel or work abroad, while others think that these should not be the only reasons to learn a new tongue.
This
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 will benefit
one
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 in many ways, other than just
traveling
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 and working in a foreign country. If
people
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 already know the native
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 of the country they are
traveling
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 to, it will be easier for them to move around the places and find work, and get settled in the local community.
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, thousands of
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 from all over the world come to Canada on work-permit visas, in the search of better jobs. Eventually,
people
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 who know English will get better opportunities than those who do not.
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,
one
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 should always learn a new
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 just as a basic survival skill in a new town.
On the contrary
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,
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 should not be the only case when
one
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 should learn a new
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. There are plenty of other situations where linguistic skills can be helpful,
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, for getting a job as a
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 teacher in a local university that has a
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 department, or as a translator for foreigners coming for tourism, or just as a hobby. Being a linguaphile, will not only provide
one
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 with better job options in its own country but will
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 give
one
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 confidence in knowing something that only a few
people
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 know in that area. To conclude, not many
people
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 learn a
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 to just move abroad, but they learn it for making themselves
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, or merely as a hobby. In my opinion,
people
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 should always find a chance to learn a new tongue, because it will benefit them in
one
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 way or another.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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