Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to takle the issue?

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remedies to lower the risks associated with

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key problem. There are a number of causes

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economic development,

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utilisation of hazardous chemicals from industrial factories.

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of chemicals are

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the river which results in water

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for human beings to use.

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in the small town use water directly from the river currently, once

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an important

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to their own health. The

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is deforestation which is one of the alarming

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global warming nowadays. Since many trees in the forest are chopped down and

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overexploit for farming and other purposes, the stored carbon is released back into the

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atmosphere

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atmosphere

as CO2,

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to global warming.

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in Dalat city is currently cut down to pave the way for tourism activities

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. In order to address the aforementioned issues, several actions can be taken into consideration. The

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measure would be that some environmental campaigns should be launched. Governments should allocate more money

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campaigns so as to raise

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should make a campaign at the local markets about the way to dump the waste properly and the negative effects of

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global warming which could affect directly

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their own life. Another efficacious way is that individuals should join

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in order to deal with the situation of global warming.

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public transportation

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of private vehicles. By doing

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global warming

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could reduce compared to using many personal

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in the streets. In conclusion, global warming can be ascribed to two reasons which are hazardous chemicals and deforestation, and

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issue can be addressed with

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of both government and individuals.