The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feautres and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feautres and make comparisons where relevant
The given line charts above show the dynamic change of people that owned electronic devices and the total of its usage in a unit of time for the period of 1920 to 2019 The first graph shows that it was no person that owned any devices in 1920 but it
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significantly rise over the next twenty years. 1960 was the time when the laundry machines and dust busters had the same amount of shares nearly seventy per cent
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the freezer hit over eight per cent ahead of the others. There has been a stagnancy rise since 1980 for washing machines and the percentage stands at about seventy-five per cent. During the year ,2019 all gears except water-based ones reached their peak as high as the maximum value of the graph.
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, figure two reveals that over the period of
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the duration of usage gradually decreased.
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the belonging devices escalated dramatically over the periods but the persistence of life hour was not.
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