Stidents should pay tuition fee by themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Schooling certainly needs money to support the teaching processes,
for example
funding the infrastructure, paying the teachers' salaries, and maintaining the quality and comfort of the facilities. Those usually are charged to pupils in the form of tuition fees. The more enhanced and complete the facilities, the higher it will be. Even though it is a fair price to pay, the societies' finance differs by a quite large gap.
This
essay will elaborate on some relevant criteria for getting free tuition fees or what we called scholarships.
Firstly
, education cost nowadays is much higher compared to ten years ago and many families have higher income due to the pandemic effect.
Moreover
, a certain schooling level is needed as one of the requirements to get a good job,
such
as a bachelor's degree. Those conditions could possibly lead to the poor will poorer.
Hence
, the government incorporated with the private sector have to fund the students with some criteria to have a high education level.
For instance
, children who pass the required exams, show a strong interest to learn, and come from poor financial backgrounds are eligible for scholarships.
Secondly
, the investors must coordinate with the schools or the colleges for giving the scholarships in order to ensure the correctness, effectiveness, and efficiency of processes.
In addition
, that coordination enables them to monitor the study progress of those students who are funded. In that way, poverty will not become the reason for people not to have proper discipline. As long there are strong will and effort, ones could have the chance to study, gain more knowledge, and
finally
improve the family's welfare. To conclude, I opine that wealthy families need to be encouraged to pay their children's tuition fees because they have more than enough financial ability on it.
On the other hand
, the poorer ones are eligible to be funded in their studies under some conditions as explained above.
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