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In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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The technologies, which have developed recently, change the way
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people
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working
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. In the past, they must go to their workplace, while today they just need to use laptops, the internet, or mobile phones to
work
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 from their own
home
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.
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 it has some drawbacks including
people
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 must
work
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 around the clock, it
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 has some positive effects
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 as
people
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 can save
their
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money
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 Working from
home
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 sometimes can make
people
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work
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 all of the time. Some
people
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 maybe think that
people
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 who
work
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 from
home
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 are not really working. In fact, sometimes they
work
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 more than the given
work
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hours
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 and it can not be good for their health.
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, the accountant who had
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hours
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 from 8 a.m. to 4 p.m. in the past, now must make financial reports for their company outside of
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work
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hours
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.
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,
this
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 problem should be discussed with the boss and make it clear that the working
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 for working from the office and
home
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 should be the same.
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, working from
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 make
people
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 not need to spend their
money
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 on transport. They do not need to worry about the cost of transportation because they just need to stay and accomplish their
work
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 from
home
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 so they can save their
money
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 to buy other needs.
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, in the past, the
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 had to visit their clients from one place to another place and cost a lot of
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. After working from
home
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 because of the pandemic COVID-19, he can save his income to get a new laptop to support their
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. In conclusion, working from
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 has some disadvantages
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 as making
people
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to
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work
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 extra because they must
work
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 outside the working
hours
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.
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, working from
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also
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 gives some benefits for
people
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such
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 as saving the
money
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 that was allocated for transport to buy other needs.

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