In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

It is true that a lot of people have gone to the office in terms of doing their occupations previously.
However
, after the
technology
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era, the way of working is changing, some people
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to utilize their own appliances (notebooks and cellphones,
for instance
) which supported by fast connection and choose to work in the places that they comfort to work, especially in their house.
This
phenomenon is called
as
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working from
home
. I
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strong to advocate
this
approach as there will be more boons than
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disadvantages. The most significant
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which
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the
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old system
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Working From
Home
is
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transportation. There is no travel cost which
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to spend in order to reach the workplace.
As a result
, it is more efficient since we can trade the accommodation outlay for
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another needs
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.
Likewise
, with regards to time travel, for someone who works in
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city,
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traffic congestion will be founded easily
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every side parts of the town. As a consequence, it takes more hours for employees to arrive
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their offices. By implementing
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Working From
Home
, we have not
to experience
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this
. It
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to
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the
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more time
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we can utilize for doing
another productive activities
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.
On the other hand
, as we are not to communicate
by
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face-to-face directly with our colleagues,
this
process will rely on
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applications which support
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mass discussion,
for
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Zoom Meetings.
However
, the internet speed affected the process of
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. Slower the connection,
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the discussion will be made.
Moreover
, we have to anticipate some noises which will bother our work,
such
as
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crying babies or the sounds from the near mosque.
In addition
, we
also
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sophisticated components for doing
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far communication, like the high specification computer or headphone. To sum up, In my own knowledge, I
am
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strong
to
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agree that the benefits of Working From
Home
outweigh the drawbacks. It is more effective and efficient, due to we did not to
have
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spend our income to cost our travel to the workplace.
Likewise
, we will have more time to do
another productive activities
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another productive activity
other productive activities
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in our
home
. The drawbacks still can be anticipated by buying the appliances and improving the connection speed.
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