Write about the following topic: Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In

this

contemporary world, becoming famous is progressively on the rise. Some

people

are of the opinion that

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should not watch every step of a

celebrity

, but rather give her some

privacy

.

Conversely

, others are

also

of the

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that there is no

such

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thing as a private

life

for a

celebrity

,

that is

just the price to pay.

This

essay will consider both views, and an opinion will be given.

Firstly

,

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lives of popular

people

have increasingly been intruded

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upon.

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By making their private

life

public

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this

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professional photographers,

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become suffocated

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and get little breathing space.

For instance

, they have to make sure that everything that they do is

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the public interest. They do not get a moment of their own where they could do as they wish. A

celebrity

always has to be appealing to the citizenry in any place he or she finds herself

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because there might be

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paparazzi

waiting to take pictures and videos of her for

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. They always have to avoid a scandal in order to maintain a good name in the entertainment industry.

This

,

however

, can lead to mental ill-health and

consequently

, suicide.

Nevertheless

, others

also

think that a

celebrity

does not have

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privacy

because she is universally known for a reason,

that is

entertaining the public.

As a result

, every aspect of her

life

must be known to

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society.

Paparazzi

take photos and videos of popular

people

to make money. They sell these photos to magazines and newspapers companies, and bloggers.

Hence

, the claim that the price to pay for being a

celebrity

is the invasion of your

privacy

. In conclusion, having

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fame is one of the things many

people

wish to have, but the price to pay is sometimes enormous. In my opinion, is up to the individual to ensure that her private

life

such

as that of her family remains concealed because

paparazzi

will continue to disturb them wherever they find themselves. Discussion on their private

life

should be limited in order to ascertain their

privacy

.