You have seen an advertisement in Australian magazines for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child write a letter # Explain why you would like this # Give detail of why you are a suitable person to employ # Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter with reference to an advertisement published in Australian magazines to look after a six-year-old
child
. I am really fascinated by
this
work. Since I am on a study break and free for the
next
06 months,
therefore
, I can manage
this
job without any difficulties.
In addition
, I am alone and feeling homesick. So,
such
a task would support me to make myself more comfortable in
this
country. Since I was born and brought up in a joint family and
also
worked part-time in a
child
care unit in my home country , I believe that
this
job would be the best fit for me. I have rich experience to handle a
child
very patiently and joyfully.
Moreover
, I have
also
completed my course in
child
psychology which would assist me to manage your kid very effectively. Well, after getting time off
this
job, I would spend my time in volunteering activities in some of the social clubs.
Also
, I am planning to learn french during my spare time. I am looking forward to hearing from you related to my interest. Yours faithfully, Helen Martin,
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