In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those crimes?

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crime rates has been increased lately,

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has been due to various reasons.

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,

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and lack of education would be the key factors which represent the higher percentage

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criminal cases.

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, the government has a significant role in mitigating

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issue.

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discuss the causes and solutions to

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situation.

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, most

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have faced various issues due to higher

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rates,

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common to each geographical area

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as in developed

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stage due to technological development

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suffering due to lack of jobs and economic crisis.

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, the end results would be quite similar whereas we can identify a growing number of drug trafficking, smuggling and robberies due to the root cause which leads to

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. Even though the cases are unacceptable given the situation people tend to rob others mainly due to hunger.

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is a sensitive factor which government should overlook from a broader perspective.

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, the lack of education we can see most of the children quitting

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school from the early days of their lives,

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happens frequently in

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world

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as India, Sri Lanka and Bangladesh as result of

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trend we can notify most of the students to tend to do odd jobs in order to look after their families.

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has a connection in relation to

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in the long run. Social research

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identified that most

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children have become thieves in various gangs which has a serious impact on the country's future. In conclusion, education and employability play

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prominent

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when

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to crime management

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government and relevant authorities should have to play a responsible role in community management yet it will cause detrimental effects on the country's future.