In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent you agree or disagree?

It is true that in many countries, the problem of an ageing population has led to an increase in medical

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. Because of

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trend, some argue that

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living in

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countries should pay for

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expenses from now on. I totally disagree with

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idea.

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with, if

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have to be responsible for expenditures on

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, the treatments of severe diseases will impose a heavy financial burden on most of them, which will hurt the economy as a whole. As the

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for treating health problems

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as cancer and heart disease are way too

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exorbitant, only wealthy

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, a small proportion of a nation’s population, can afford

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expenses.

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tells the fact that most

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, without high incomes or savings, will fail to pay for the medical fee if they contract a severe disease.

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, these

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will tend to keep saving their money

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of spending it on purchasing goods or shopping, in order to prepare for potential

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expenditures in the future. And the social economy would be sluggish

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the lack of consumption. On top of that, if medical

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were paid by

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rather than governments,

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would become revenue-oriented, which

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be detrimental to

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.

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and other members of the

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system should play the role of non-profitable organizations in the public,

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they can focus on tackling health problems for the citizens.

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can be realized if governments pay for the bill of

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and provide financial support to them. Yet if the burden of medical expenditures falls on

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,

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and other

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organizations would try to excavate as many profits from their

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and achieve

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outcome in some inappropriate ways.

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,

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may sell overpriced medicines to their

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in order to make profits

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of

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trend.

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, these organizations may not concentrate on curing

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and the health conditions of social members cannot be treated in a good way. In conclusion, I firmly believe that a nation's

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should not be responsible for medical

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, since

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will hurt the economy and make

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become revenue-oriented.

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, it is reasonable for the governments to pay for the related

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provisions.