Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach everyone a person how to be good parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people believe it would be beneficial for schools to advise

students

on how to be awesome

parents

. From my point of view, I totally agree about teaching

students

in a new way especially

this

knowledge because every people will become someone's parent in the future.

This

topic will be discussed in the following passage. Learning in

school

is now extremely important for

students

, and teachers should teach not just the main courses but

also

practical

life

skills.

For instance

, how to become good

parents

this

skill

also

is part of

life

in the future and should be taught in

school

for student's

life

. In fact, almost every time, we spend time with our

parents

, learn how they taught, and remember to use in the future.

That is

why we should have

this

skill to learn in

school

and teachers should be careful to teach

this

lesson to their

students

to become good families.

Moreover

students

can have an easier way to learn how to become good

parents

instead

learn from the internet. It might

also

be a useful way for them to learn from their own

parents

. But how can someone be certain that their own

parents

are trustworthy enough to respect? So the

school

should put

this

lesson to schedule as well. In conclusion, I agree that we should have been taught and given the tools to grow into good people from an early age.

Additionally

, we can learn a variety of

life

skills that will help us best for adjusting and utilize our own families.

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