As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
As the majority of adults spend most of their time at
work
, being content with their career
is a crucial part of their health and happiness. Fix the agreement mistake
careers
This
essay will first discuss how being respected and well paid contribute
toward Correct subject-verb agreement
contributes
job
satisfaction and then
suggest that expecting everyone to be happy with their career is unrealistic because many people’s circumstances force them to work
in unfulfilling jobs.
One factor that leads to people being satisfied with their job
is being treated with respect. If employees feel that their managers appreciate them and the work
they do, it gives them a sense of ownership and they enjoy their work
more because their contributions matter. A fair salary and benefits are also
important considerations. If workers feel they are being underpaid, they will either resent their bosses or look for another job
. In Myanamr
, Correct your spelling
Myanmar
for example
, the most cited reason for leaving a job
was an inadequate salary.
I do not think it is feasible to expect everyone to enjoy their work
because many people have no other choice but to do jobs they do not like. Attaining a rewarding job
usually requires a good education, which many people cannot afford. The result is that they end up working in unsatisfying roles just to be able to survive. An example of this
is workers in sweatshops or factories, who cannot quit their terrible jobs because they are unable to secure better employment elsewhere
.
In conclusion, being satisfied at work
is an important part of a person’s wellbeing
, and respect from management and fair pay can improve one’s level of happiness. Correct your spelling
well-being
However
, job
satisfaction for all workers is an unrealistic prospect because circumstances make it impossible for everyone to have a rewarding job
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task achievement
You have presented a well-rounded argument and addressed both parts of the prompt clearly. However, consider providing a few more specific examples or statistics to strengthen your points.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear and logical structure, and the paragraphs are well-organized. Ensure each paragraph flows smoothly into the next by using more varied linking words and phrases.
coherence cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion are well-defined, setting up the essay and rounding it off effectively.
coherence cohesion
The main points are well-supported and effectively argued, providing clear reasons and examples for your claims.
task achievement
You have completely and clearly responded to the task, covering both factors that contribute to job satisfaction and the feasibility of job satisfaction for all.
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