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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #professionals #doctors #engineers #work #country
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Humans believe that everybody who has an education degree has to find a job in a
country
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 where they passed their courses. Other
people
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 argue that they can
work
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 in any state where they liked. I personally agree with
people
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 who say that they can
work
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 in any state. On the one hand, some
people
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 argue that everybody who has an educational degree should
work
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 in a nation where they passed their
course
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 . They have some reasons for their argument that the main of them is somebody who registers for the exact
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 is using financial sources which are for the nation's
people
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 so they should
work
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 there to thank the
people
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.
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 in some ,nations it is a rule that
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 should pass a period of time after their
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 to
work
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 in an
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 where they registered for their
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.
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, Some
people
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 believe that anyone can go everywhere for
work
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 and it is not necessary to
work
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 in the same
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 where passed their
course
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. They have some reasons.
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,
people
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 should like where they are working so they can go everywhere for
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 .
secondly
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, sometimes
people
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 of where they finished their
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, don’t need their skills in their
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 so they should
work
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 in another
area
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.
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, a
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 has many doctors , new Medical graduates can’t find a good situation in the
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 so they should go somewhere that needs Medical graduates .
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, some
people
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 have a dream that living in another
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 and working there. In conclusion, we find that some humans argue that
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 should
work
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 where they passed their
course
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 and other
people
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 believe that anybody can
work
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 where they like.I personally agree with the
second
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 group of
people
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 .I believe
people
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 should be free in all of their choices.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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