Nowadays, many people have to work longer hours, and they feel more stressed out than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their employees' lives easier?
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, they cannot achieve a work-life balance. Employees need to spend more time on work which means less rest and leisure moments, Linking Words
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, a well-known American Scientist, Einstein once said that mental health is important to achieve job stability and efficiency.
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lets employees have a bonus day to retreat themselves from a stressed working environment.
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