Does the educational success of a student depend on the teacher or the attitude. Discuss both view and give your opinion. Some people ar
Some people argued that
does
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apply
result
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results
whether
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apply
depend
on the instructor or the attention of Correct subject-verb agreement
depends
student
. In my opinion, to achieve Add an article
the student
a student
the
educational success, we need to pay way more attention Correct article usage
apply
for
schooling.
There are several Change preposition
to
reason
why Change to a plural noun
reasons
success
of the education Add an article
the success
depend
on the educator. Change the verb form
depends
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, most student
are achieving good Change to a plural noun
students
result
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results
on
the educational field, Change preposition
in
as a
result
of their instructors’ good and satisfactory knowledge
. Even lots of pupils’ knowledge
getting better compare to their teachers
, of course, after teacher
taught the learner with Correct article usage
the teacher
the
good Correct article usage
apply
knowledge
. That is
why,
a large number of humans believe that Remove the comma
apply
teachers
composition on the Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
students
educational success is far Change noun form
student's
students'
more high
and Replace the words
higher
dependandable
.
Correct your spelling
dependable
However
, I believe that students
’ attitude
is much dependable
to Correct quantifier usage
more dependable
achieve
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achieving
the
academic Correct article usage
apply
successful
rather than Replace the word
success
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the teachers
teachers
position. For Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
this
reason, although
teachers
hard teaches
and pay more attention to Change the verb form
teach
students
, Add an article
the pupil
a pupil
pupil
may not have an interest or outlook for Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
this
lesson. Afterwards, they may not accept these
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this knowledge
knowledge
and all of attempts
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the attempts
of
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apply
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the teacher
teacher
might be nickel-and-dime. A good example is that Isaak Nyuton had everlastingly motivation and Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
attitude
to physic
subject and with the help of Add an article
the physic
this
attitude
, he was able to do self- study
, and Correct your spelling
self-study
this things
showed its own good Change the determiner
this thing
these things
result
on his educational field and he was manage
to become a famous inventor for his incredible inventions.
To conclude, Change the verb form
managed
Although
there are more benefits of Add an article
the teacher
a teacher
teacher
on the Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
students
academic Change noun form
student's
students'
successful
, Replace the word
success
but
I feel that the Remove the conjunction
apply
students
own Change noun form
student's
students'
attitude
and composition on
the educational field is far more important rather than Change preposition
in
teachers
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