Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The quality of
Use synonyms
country
Correct article usage
a country
determine
across Change the verb form
determines
Use synonyms
country's
systems Correct article usage
the country's
such
as education, Linking Words
economic
, health care and sports. Replace the word
economy
Furthermore
, each of these systems Linking Words
combined
together. Add a missing verb
is combined
However
, some Linking Words
people
think Use synonyms
government
should be attended to develop Add an article
the government
economic
system while others think it should Correct article usage
an economic
be progress
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progress
all
types. The ensure paragraphs of Change preposition
of all
this
essay will discuss Linking Words
about
both of Remove the preposition
apply
Linking Words
this
opinions.
Economical success Correct determiner usage
these
improve
the advancement of Correct subject-verb agreement
improves
Use synonyms
country
, it determines Add an article
the country
Use synonyms
country's
developmental level Correct article usage
a country's
such
as development, non-development and developed Linking Words
country
. With Use synonyms
the
globalization, Correct article usage
apply
people
have to keep relationships over the world. Some ingredients are imported from other countries, Use synonyms
as
Change preposition
for
an
example, rice, dhal and electrical items. If have more dollars, can Correct article usage
apply
imported
raw- materials Wrong verb form
import
as
enough. The other reason is Change preposition
apply
advancement
of Add an article
the advancement
an advancement
intrastructures
. To supply perfect facilities, required a lot of money. Correct your spelling
infrastructures
infrastructure
As
Change preposition
For
an
instance, Correct article usage
apply
for
electricity, water and sanitary facilities can supply to every Change preposition
apply
people
within equal, if have enough wealth.
Every Use synonyms
fields
effect to success of Change to a singular noun
field
nation
. Without Add an article
the nation
a nation
good
education, there will notAdd an article
a good
Add a missing verb
be a
a
intelligent ruler. As well as, educated Change the article
an
people
earn money Use synonyms
to
their nation as foreign employees. The other one is Change preposition
for
strength
health care system. As an example, with the corona epidemic, some high economical countries got down due to Correct article usage
the strength
lack
of health care Correct article usage
a lack
system
like Fix the agreement mistake
systems
Indea
. With the improvement of all fields, Correct your spelling
India
nation
can bright among other countries as a star. Add an article
a nation
the nation
As
Change preposition
For
an
instance, with the success of sports, can brand Correct article usage
apply
county's
Correct article usage
a county's
Correct your spelling
name in
namein
the world across competitions Correct your spelling
name in
such
as Linking Words
Olympic
, world cup.
In the conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
Olympics
the
Correct article usage
a
strength
economy Replace the word
strong
cause
to destroy poverty. Change the verb form
causes
However
, the Linking Words
progressing
of all types of systems Replace the word
progress
related
to Add a missing verb
is related
increase
Change the verb form
increasing
quality
of Add an article
the quality
Use synonyms
country
. Personally, I believe Add an article
the country
progressing
Replace the word
progress
of
all fields Change preposition
in
better
than Add a missing verb
is better
progress
Add an article
the progress
of
one field.Change preposition
in
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