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a major
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also
create
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impact
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an impact
in
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on
people
's lives
. However
, I agree with this
statement
. In this
essay give your personal point of view and the contrary as well.
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because of Add an article
the statement
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several
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several
reason
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reasons
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income
through technology
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technology
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people
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, I would like to outline one more major impact which improving human lives
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apply
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the internet
technology
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apply
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the apps
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personal information which is Correct article usage
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security
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a security
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them. everyone is not comfortable Change preposition
to
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on our Fix the agreement mistake
applications
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smartphones
smart phones
so they ask about our sex, date Correct your spelling
smartphones
birth
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of birth
Moreover
, society diagree
with Correct your spelling
disagree
this
statement
because of some reason. such
as technology
also
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commit
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committed
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commit
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embarrass
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commit
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suicide.
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committed
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create a
improvement Change the article
an
since
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for
few
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a few
year
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years
lives
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the statement
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websites
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